Tokyo+Bank+Robber

Tokyo Bank Robber “ So you’ll be entering $300 dollars into your bank account Miss July?” The bank woman said “Yeah pretty much.” I replied “Okay done.” Before anything else could be said. BANG!!!

The windows smashed into sharp broken pieces. A shadow man appeared with a machinegun shooting bullets into the air. “Put your hands in the air!” The shadow man shouted. Then the man knocked me unconscious with a metal bat and tied my hands and feet up with rope. I blacked out.

I slowly started to open my eyes. Many tied up hostages surrounded me. I knew if I did anything wrong I could die. Knocking me unconscious was only a warning to everyone. Fear struck me. Sweat poured from my head and neck. My whole body started quivering. I could slightly hear the sound of the news reporter. “Here we are at the Tokyo bank where 26 people are held hostage. The robber is still unidentified.”

BANG!!! The windows shattered again. Was it the shadow mans henchmen? Was it super man? No it was… “James Bond here. I’ve come to save the hostages!” He said into a strange device. “What are you doing?! I’m trying to rob the bank!”

Then James Bond grabbed the rope that connected my two tied up hands together and jumped out of the shattered window. He took out another device and shot it towards the window ceils. It attached itself the ceils. “Think of it as bungee jumping!” “What about the other hostages?” I asked. “I’ll get them later!”

I fell down lower and lower. It didn’t feel like bungee jumping at all. I was scared to death it was choking me. I couldn’t breath. “We’re on the ground now you can let go.” I opened my eyes we were on the ground. I jumped off of him and ran into the crowd. Looking for somewhere to hide.

Then a van passed by. The shadow man was inside. He got arrested! “CIAO!!!” I shouted at him.

By Esther C The End

Did you enjoy reading my story? Yes

My story was a narrative.Did you think the resolution to my problem was realistic? I think James Bond is very realistic

Do you think I used creative language? Yes alot Are there any comments you would like to make? Good job good job.